Flux Capacitor: well fed

Friday, January 30, 2009

gone to ms basil's files

-maggie may ethridge

yolanda said...: i will always have this hunger too!
love it, you are audatious(?), audaz.
yolanda; January 30, 2009 2:01 AM
Eveningson said...: Excellent imagery sharpened by juxtapostion.

Vodka words in one of your other poems. I like that too.

There is an elide
a rabbit of sounds
a roundness of verbs
in writings of a woman
that I cannot seem to
evoke
no matter how hard I try
or how often.

Your poem explains some of the reasons I think.; January 30, 2009 5:50 AM
Shannon said...: ooh yeah! this one is worth reading a few times over in a row.; January 30, 2009 7:31 AM
Annie King said...: Good rhythm, sound, and momentum in your own unique voice!; January 30, 2009 11:15 AM
Lola said...: Love it!; January 30, 2009 1:20 PM
a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous! said...: "this woman well-fed". indeed. yes ma'm.; January 30, 2009 7:56 PM
Chris said...: Beautiful...; January 31, 2009 2:50 PM