tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post5910766073282043111..comments2023-10-07T07:26:20.469-07:00Comments on Flux Capacitor: bottle fed babyMaggie Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699674732274478502noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-70952956821560528112009-02-08T22:12:00.000-08:002009-02-08T22:12:00.000-08:00Annie i feel blessed to have the criticism of such...Annie i feel blessed to have the criticism of such a caring reader. You love literature like i do and i so very much value your opinion.<BR/><BR/>thank you everyone for reading my poetry, thank you so much!Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699674732274478502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-80757834963195497562009-02-08T19:10:00.000-08:002009-02-08T19:10:00.000-08:00I still think there are some point-of-view issues ...I still think there are some point-of-view issues in this particular poem, but I like it a lot. I agree, your writing is brilliant. Your voice is unique, idiosyncratic (a good thing), eventful, complex, and significant. When your first book of poems is published, I will be first in line to buy it!Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12588164536314320479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-79329303980876570072009-02-06T21:03:00.000-08:002009-02-06T21:03:00.000-08:00I really like 'she's your blood, but you aren't fo...I really like 'she's your blood, but you aren't fond of blood...'<BR/><BR/>It's really beautiful and frightening.anymommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17870033179328734404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-27771309097185653052009-02-06T19:54:00.000-08:002009-02-06T19:54:00.000-08:00I have a little award for you at The Jason Show......I have a little award for you at The Jason Show...Jason, as himselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630210317307544165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-26549670857305459672009-02-06T02:19:00.000-08:002009-02-06T02:19:00.000-08:00Thankyou :) ... i love the quote at the top of you...Thankyou :) ... i love the quote at the top of your page :) its beautiful...<BR/><BR/><3Laura Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13460929807513169251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-59457372407824112302009-02-05T20:21:00.000-08:002009-02-05T20:21:00.000-08:00This is so interesting. I'm trying to figure out ...This is so interesting. I'm trying to figure out exactly what it means---some of it is obvious, but some? I'm not sure.<BR/><BR/>You're so talented.Jason, as himselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16630210317307544165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-24542389864182849662009-02-05T19:29:00.000-08:002009-02-05T19:29:00.000-08:00Brilliant. Don't change a word.Killer line:her mou...Brilliant. Don't change a word.<BR/><BR/>Killer line:<BR/><BR/>her mouth opens like your birthing wound,<BR/>and climbs in a soprano.<BR/><BR/>Just fabulous.Collin Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777180960376039699noreply@blogger.com