tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post5591826856851482546..comments2023-10-07T07:26:20.469-07:00Comments on Flux Capacitor: probably the worst poem i've ever written*Maggie Mayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14699674732274478502noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-33285644388605660432010-06-13T16:53:43.768-07:002010-06-13T16:53:43.768-07:00I wish this were MY worst poem.I wish this were MY worst poem.Ms. Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09776404747858099919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-39458630521289825312010-06-13T15:48:52.055-07:002010-06-13T15:48:52.055-07:00Hi Maggie,
You use great imagery, and cliches ar...Hi Maggie, <br /><br />You use great imagery, and cliches are not cliches when they say everything you mean. This poem is genuine and sincere, and it reminds the reader how transforming a real love can be, and how when it is right, we know it. <br /><br />I love this truth: <br />"love is full of these cliches. yet singularly beautiful despite."Anniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12588164536314320479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-28396892381145276562010-06-13T12:33:42.886-07:002010-06-13T12:33:42.886-07:00Beautiful poem, but I can understand posting/shari...Beautiful poem, but I can understand posting/sharing a poem and not liking it. That happens with me sometimes and I want to disappear or wish back the poem or somehow undo it, like eating too many Baked Cheeto puffs and feeling regret.<br /><br />But this poem is much gorgeousness. Much.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-70757130286555937522010-06-13T12:17:24.655-07:002010-06-13T12:17:24.655-07:00I enjoyed this. Let it sit for a while and then yo...I enjoyed this. Let it sit for a while and then you can decide how best to edit it.Hannah Stephensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15792203070774504501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-82045688101319833152010-06-13T11:34:27.919-07:002010-06-13T11:34:27.919-07:00I do like the way you use 'revolution' whe...I do like the way you use 'revolution' when what might be expected is 'revelation' :)<br /><br />(thanks for your comment, btw)Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12744935670083266833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-60120826326972957372010-06-13T08:39:43.277-07:002010-06-13T08:39:43.277-07:00I think the entire poem is awesome. In my opinion...I think the entire poem is awesome. In my opinion, there are no bad poems. The world needs all the poetry it can get. Thanks for sharing this. Blessings!Marionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14786883679294446945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-67613820384088782802010-06-13T08:13:07.883-07:002010-06-13T08:13:07.883-07:00no, the breast-in-mouth syndrome isn't quite m...no, the breast-in-mouth syndrome isn't quite masculine, but I know a man who lights my world aflame with this simple act... I've never felt that way about it in my life, with anyone else <3<br /><br />I like your "worst" poem :)Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09542024214304554108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-66397549745508482012010-06-13T07:56:58.323-07:002010-06-13T07:56:58.323-07:00Oh, I don't know. I like the John Cusack refe...Oh, I don't know. I like the John Cusack reference!justmakingourwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01410133602131763514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-42365215630519484462010-06-13T07:19:44.480-07:002010-06-13T07:19:44.480-07:00Awww. Maggot Pie! I love it.Awww. Maggot Pie! I love it.erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00513388452402495090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-30252746557561127712010-06-13T05:44:56.360-07:002010-06-13T05:44:56.360-07:00it's hard to put all that love into to words.....it's hard to put all that love into to words...because it is beyond their capability. It's like when you take a picture of something, it's just never as beautiful as the subject. There's alway this little disappointment.. "Oh you had to see it, it was just magnificent!!!" I enjoyed this, though. It made me feel every bit of 16 and a half...and I've been reminiscing about that time a lot lately. Crazy forties!<br />Blue balled car! (snort)<br /><br />Peace ~ ReneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-53212053346946505182010-06-13T05:00:43.028-07:002010-06-13T05:00:43.028-07:00It's a beautiful poem...full of heart and trut...It's a beautiful poem...full of heart and truth and love. I wouldn't hack any of it if I were you.Wine and Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06778785233226804217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-3132568880329909912010-06-13T03:15:54.135-07:002010-06-13T03:15:54.135-07:00from the heart, it's all beautiful! :)from the heart, it's all beautiful! :)Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-972647577919000054.post-48050137805552851802010-06-12T22:45:59.296-07:002010-06-12T22:45:59.296-07:00if i hacked off the last three stanzas it would be...if i hacked off the last three stanzas it would be all right. i don't feel like it! ha!<br /><br />hm.Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699674732274478502noreply@blogger.com